“with college communal” — with the college’s community
“if the student is grossing well” — if the student earns a lot of money
“due to job involvement” — due to work involvement
“There also exist disadvantages” — there are also disadvantages
“This is because too much work and less studying are in a position to lower test scores and grades” — This is because too much work and less studying can lower a student’s test scores and grades.
Style and word choice: 2/10
“scholars who work portion-time” — students who work part-time
“Students who have part-time involvement like jobs” — odd wording
“On the other hand, several individuals in society believe that students who do not work portion time or full time are getting improved know-how from their life.” — However, others believe that students who don’t work part-time or full-time learn more in their day-to-day lives
“Different jobs offer changed type of exposure” — Different jobs offer a different type of exposure
“Besides, part-time jobs help students to develop different skills. Like supremacy, way of managing different people, managing traumatic circumstances, time conscious, among others.” — Besides, part-time jobs help students to develop different skills such as managing people, handling difficult situations and time management, among others
“several society members” — the wording is odd and misleading, should have been formulated as “some members of the society”
“Some welfares of not doing part-time jobs, like a student, will get enough time to concentrate on their stuff and get occupied in speculative undertakings.” — One of the benefits of not working part-time as a student is being able to concentrate on your own projects and interests
“can lead to burning out an aspect that results in stress” — can lead to stress and burnout
“University already engages students in stressful times, and a part-time job again adds its stress.” — For students, the university can be very stressful, and a part-time job creates even more stress
“All this stress together can lead to depression and lead to complications.” — All that stress can lead to depression and complications
“It helps students grow various skills” — it helps students develop various skills
“do not affect their grades at all costs” — do not affect their grades in any way
“Students who work take the best of this life” — Students who work get the most out of life
Punctuation: 5/10
Since many sentences were difficult to understand, it’s hard to say whether the punctuation was good or not.
Formating: 9/10
The paper was formatted properly except for the page numbers — the writer should have put them in the upper-right corner of the page.
Originality: 10/10
Plagiarism was not detected.
Documentation and evidence: 10/10
The sources were relevant and the author cited them properly.
Following instructions: 10/10
The writer followed all the instructions.
Punctuality: 10/10
The paper was delivered before the deadline.
Ordering and delivery: 10/10
The ordering process was fast and easy.
Communication with support: 10/10
The support was great. They were friendly, replied very fast, and offered us a discount when we asked for one. The customer support agents answered to all the questions we had and told us that their company is based in Poland, while their writers are allegedly from the US, the UK, and Canada.
Communication with the writer: 1/10
We didn’t get a chance to communicate with the writer.
Payment: 10/10
The payment was fast and secure.
Ideas and content: 4/10
“scholars who work portion-time are far better of when it comes to information” — it’s not quite clear what information the writer is referring to
“When a student blows their part-time jobs” — it’s not clear what the writer means
“A logic that plays a significant role in helping students in the scope of success in various responsibilities” — the sentence is not finished
“It is open that students who have part-time jobs can get in place expenses by themselves and dedicate the rest of their notch to their interests without taking affirmation from anyone.” — the sentence does not make sense
“if the student is grossing well and does not get approval from anyone, parents never acknowledge the student’s undertakings” — it’s not clear what the writer intended to say
“students must not get involved in part-time jobs as it may be a central reason for cooperating their learning” — the sentence doesn’t make sense
Organization: 9/10
The paper was separated into several paragraphs, which made it very easy to follow. The essay also had an introduction and a conclusion.
What was good
The company’s customer support is great. The paper is formatted properly, and the writer followed all the instructions they were given.
What was missing
The writer’s English is terrible. The essay was very hard to understand, and the author failed to get their point across.
Overall
Despite the fact that the ordering process was very easy and the customer support was very helpful, the essay itself is a disaster. The writer is clearly not a native English speaker. There isn’t one sentence in the entire essay that wouldn’t have a mistake. It is evident that the writer tried to use more advanced vocabulary, which didn’t end well at all. If a student submitted that paper, they would probably fail the class.
